this is pretty goos, sometimes it doesn't make sense but i like how you inverse it, it makes it seem more interesting.

I loved this. This is one of the few poems I could really actually relate to. I especially liked the last four lines. Was it a song or a poem? It totally seemed like a song to me but then I realized it wasn't in that catagory...although it doesn't really matter so yah. Anyways terrific writting, keep up the great work!

i could just imaginine someone panicking towards the end of that poem lol, at the nd its like someone is comforting them, erm, well i thought it was great! XDa girl trying to keep up the facade of being alright, fake fake fake smiles all over the place :) cool.

Wow, I really liked this piece! But I was surprised it was in the angst category. In my mind, it was a song and sounded really cheerful! Anyway, I thought you have a great word choice, and it sounds motivational. I can't wait to read your other pieces!

Woah. Chills dude. Great. Loved it.

dangg... this b like the first poem i b putting on my fav list... this is good... realli god... wowoowowowoowowowoow meseirous pe whee whats that smell...sry that was random, but yhea... ow good descripistions and sturff and yehs keep them poems comings ma'am... shoot i rote ma'ma at first hahahahah

wow, this is a really deep poem! it means a lot, and i can relate to it!

I love this poem! It SO describes how I feel sometimes! Gr...stupid PMS!! Anyways! Gotta go! I have to write that email to you! URGH! Sorry it took so long! My internet has been down for a while...and so, uh, I couldn't write emails...^^;; stupid technology...grr! Anyways, this poem shows much angst...and I mean that in the best way possible! Anyways, much luv,

*Orient Fox*

wow!

Wow, I really like this. I guess usually I can't relate that much to poems (probably because I SUCK AT WRITING IT...) but, I could sort of understand what you meant. I like how you described the smile as wide and plastic. Whenever I get in fights with friends, I always try to act calm, and they always think I really am, but for the most part I am either really sad or really angry inside. And I like the last line especially. Good job-- powerful the whole way through, and it even rhymes!

wow...that's really good...great job.