I love ur poems. they are powerful stuff.

WOW.

i want to explain how i think this poem is beautiful and tragic, but i can't think of any kind of words that could explain how powerful this poem is.

it made me want to cry.

it's most definitely found its way on to my favourite's list. and so have you! i love your work!

Wow, intense and beauitufl. Flows very well.

This was beautiful. I'm so sorry about your loss. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy

Beautiful poem...really touching as it is dedicated to someone. Beautiful and touching...

!* Noelle *!

Aww...that's really unfortunate to hear, but as usual, a great poem!

OMG I actually cried at that... Absolutely beautiful. The first time a poem has EVER made me cry! Well done! x

Oh my gosh that's so SAD! And sweet...really, really bittersweet. I love this poem! It's amazing. It just reaches down and pulls at your heart. It's...I can't even put it into words. I'm speechless. You ROCK.

Em

It was nice how you dedicated this poem to a friend. It's a great poem. I like it a lot. Reminds me of somebody I know. Keep it up. _

Amazing. Beautifully written and expertly crafted but yet not as if written by an arrogant person. I am about to think you take yourself too seriously and then you say a line which feels like a reminicse and I can feel that this is genuine

wow.. very sad and beautifully written.. Im sorry for your loss

touching. great job the only thing is somewhere in the middle i couldnt quite grasp what u were trying to say. if you add maybe a line or two that are more obvious it would help those of us who are slower. hehe ok great job, i felt for someone i didnt know for a moment there.

WOW is all I have to say.

the last few lines were pure genius, beautiful & stark.

RIP.

-lin

Hi F.J

If it came across that I was offended, please don't feel that. I wasn't.

You are entitled to the way you feel and If I couldn't accept it I shouldn't be a writer.

Anyway, I just thought that it might help a bit, if I clarified things as to my motives for writing the piece as I did.

I am not offended, so please don't worry.

Always

Your friend writing.

F.C