I like this one. I think you should keep on with this one.

u realy need to finish it its a good story so far

I like this story alot

I love this chapter. Keep up the good work with the story and i cant wait to see what happens next.

This is really starting to get interesting. Can't wait to see more of Deamon.

Wow! What's going to happen next? This guy sounds weird...I wonder what Wil lhappen? Great job on this chapter! (Maybe you could go read my fic? Please?) Ja Ne!

This story sounds very pormising, and perhaps more would read if you made the summary a little more clearer. It appears a bit jumbled, and could use some revising :)

Luv this story

There was some spelling and grammer u might want to fix. but other than that they story was quite good and I wish for you to continue on with it!

P.S.-if u may have the time I can u please read and review my work, thanks if ya do?