I like the dialogue, and how it carries on the plot despite the lack of descriptors. It's fun to read and sounds very natural! I know, I know, I need to stop mentioning that this story is fun to read. Sorry!
But again, continuity is good. See, I'm showing it in my reviews by mentioning the same things over and over again-- you need to do the same and try to keep some consistency in your writing style! I don't like how you keep ditching different elements of your writing style, like the narrator and Paige's thoughts. I quite liked them, and now I miss them!
Can't wait till you update!
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

This repetition is much better, very easy to put up with and actually fitting, giving the situation. I quite like it! This chapter is short, sweet, and funny, plus it actually gets somewhere (even if it's only in the last four sentences!)
I do wish, however, that the narrator would come back. I liked him, and continuity is always good. Also, when did Paige start thinking? Like I said, continuity is good.
--Yna, from the Review Marathon

I'm enjoying this narrator! He's very faerie tale and fun to listen to, and he knows when to shut up.
On the other hand, Kat doesn't seem to. Repetition is good, but this is just pointless. You can make your point without having her ask the same question a million times! It distracts people, just a teensy bit...
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

What an intriguing introduction! I particularly enjoyed the onomatopoeia-- a very creative sound, to say the least, and I'm sure that it tells readers exactly how the rest of the story will be. Way to make us want to read more!
I'm not quite getting the slurp, though. Of all the reasons to stop a story, it's because the tape player ate the tape? I'd much rather something more interesting, like a dragon or an angry opossum.
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)

continue! please?

suspenseful! good job!lol, I have pet rats too.

I really can't think of anything to say except that this is really good. Keep it up!

Hmm... Paige kind of reminds me of someone I know...

Paige is a cool character. Typical teen and typcical sister. Can't wait to see what happens next!

haha! Very unique! I loved the begining!

Funny. Loved the beginning, with the tape recorder thing...Love the story already

Hey this story rox! I really like it, it is very humorous, update soon please!