0_0 dude i flipped out wen i read that. detective to nun? wat in the hell... anyways this story still heas a tight grip on me and i cant wait for the next 7 hours.
ah yes in the 1st few chappies the man would talk to her in the beginning . has that section disappear because he is not real or because she thinks he is not real?

i hav a theory abot hansen and richards mysterious activities but i dont wanna say cuz i may b way off.

WHOA! Didn't see THAT coming . but what abot d man?

yep this man has caused her to go against her self and wat shes supposed to b. I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G

hm is she a nun? those r the vows i can think that she b reluctant to bresk. after all it doesnt mention a lover yet so ill keep reading

Aiee! this is so Cool-LIO!

Wow! You are an amazing writer. This story is TWISTED- I love that! OK. I have to know how it ends... keep writing! You were worried about the confusion in the last chapter, but honestly that's what makes it a thriller... it's good to keep everyone guessing. Even if the reader is left confused, it's good, because it pushes them to read on to find answers. Good work! (I can already see a book trailer for youtube... with the voice saying his little speech and flashes of a knife and blood and mysterious eyes and the mouth of the man...)

Wow. I am one confused little girl. You really know how to make us lost. I think she's just crazy, but that could mean she's either one, ne? Lala, we'll just have to wait and see, I suppose...Hope to see more of this soon, it's oh-so-addicting ^^

I'm confused once more. With this chapter, I'm now more inclined to think that Rachael is the crazy one. That she in fact is a prostitute addicted to "high def", or whatever that is. The actions of the doctors and people around her seem normal. But, why in hell is the detective asking her, "Who are you." Maybe it's all in Rachael's drugged up head? Or maybe that guy is manipulating her? I don't know.

I'm as dense as a regular layman, so I don't even know if I'm missing some huge hint or not. Every chapter, I look for the hints, the subtle, blunt and almost blatent with its harshness. But, I can't figure it out. Every few paragraphs, every few sentences, every few words I'm inclined to think differently. I'm stuck in an "if and then" stage of thinking here. Is Rachael a prostitute, a nun, a confused person in the middle of an identity-crisis. And that man. Does he even exist? Did he really kidnapp her, torture her, rape her, or does he not even exist? Damn, I'm more confused that ever. My thinking just runs around in circles, over and over again.

I first thought: "Maybe, she's a nun after all, and the guy telling her the contrary was messing with her head." But seeing the end of this chapter, I'm now thinking: "I don't know what crack she took, but it's good." lol I'm now totally lost (Lost? ^^) by this story, but in a positive way, don't worry. I can't wait to know more about what's happening here.

I really enjoyed this. It reminded me of the tension of 24, but more interesting. I like your characters and I find that I can relate to some of them (although I don't think I ought to tell you which). Um...anyway, I hope you find the time and inspiration to update this, because I'm looking forward to the sixth hour, if there is one.

marvelous~

wish for more gore and yeah...=D.

excellent taste.

I bet you don't need to hear this from me, but you're writting is great. You inspired me, now i need to be better then you n_n not that i'm any good right now. I'll read on and i think i'll start workin on my own crap stories.U R Rad

Sorry I just now read this. :). Busy busy busy. It was good. Wonderful, nothing less than I expected. Man... I'm just not understanding why you're not published yet! I just re-read the second chapter of Violent tendencies and slash-dance future. I wasn't able to review them... they were all good. Well, I updated Hellcat just now. I'll be updating more now that I have 3 days off. Work sucks...especially at McDonalds.

Much love, ttyl and all that good stuff.

-Yin

Now that's just about the worst thing in the world, when you said that this chapter didn't come out to your expectations. Because it rocked.

Sorry I couldn't read the fourth hour until now, its just that I've had a very severe case of writer's block that has crippled the creative juices for about four months so far. I'm hoping that I can find some inspiration now that school's started again, although I can't be sure...but forget about me, that's not what this review's about.

ALL of this in one night? Wow, I'd really hate to be Rachel right about now. (don't get me wrong, though-- there's nothing wrong with the story. Just a matter of personal opinion.) Anyways, I dearly love the fact that there is still more of your wonderful suspense and supernatural elements in this work (as well as some obvious Terryll awesomeness ^^). I am addicted to all things fantasy and supernatural, and this is a welcome break from some of the other stories I read in those particular categories, as well as the ones I write.

I don't know why, but there's just something so GREAT about all of your confrontations! I also loved the supernatural element that pervaded the entire discussion. They're so addicting to read, and even more so to write, trust me. ^^

Oh, and don't worry about all the things you think wrong in your story: after all, mind-numbing confusion and semi-directionlessness is how almost all suspenseful stories are.

Until next time.