Reviews for th13rteen hours: under the skin

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KonekOniko 2006-04-02 ch 6,	Wow. I am one confused little girl. You really know how to make us lost. I think she's just crazy, but that could mean she's either one, ne? Lala, we'll just have to wait and see, I suppose...Hope to see more of this soon, it's oh-so-addicting ^^
kazoua 2006-04-01 ch 6,	I'm confused once more. With this chapter, I'm now more inclined to think that Rachael is the crazy one. That she in fact is a prostitute addicted to "high def", or whatever that is. The actions of the doctors and people around her seem normal. But, why in hell is the detective asking her, "Who are you." Maybe it's all in Rachael's drugged up head? Or maybe that guy is manipulating her? I don't know. I'm as dense as a regular layman, so I don't even know if I'm missing some huge hint or not. Every chapter, I look for the hints, the subtle, blunt and almost blatent with its harshness. But, I can't figure it out. Every few paragraphs, every few sentences, every few words I'm inclined to think differently. I'm stuck in an "if and then" stage of thinking here. Is Rachael a prostitute, a nun, a confused person in the middle of an identity-crisis. And that man. Does he even exist? Did he really kidnapp her, torture her, rape her, or does he not even exist? Damn, I'm more confused that ever. My thinking just runs around in circles, over and over again.
Profiterole 2006-04-01 ch 6,	I first thought: "Maybe, she's a nun after all, and the guy telling her the contrary was messing with her head." But seeing the end of this chapter, I'm now thinking: "I don't know what crack she took, but it's good." lol I'm now totally lost (Lost? ^^) by this story, but in a positive way, don't worry. I can't wait to know more about what's happening here.
quinnnnn 2006-03-05 ch 5,	I really enjoyed this. It reminded me of the tension of 24, but more interesting. I like your characters and I find that I can relate to some of them (although I don't think I ought to tell you which). Um...anyway, I hope you find the time and inspiration to update this, because I'm looking forward to the sixth hour, if there is one.
Ice and Snow 2006-01-08 ch 1,	marvelous~ wish for more gore and yeah...=D. excellent taste.
Callipygian 2005-09-27 ch 1,	I bet you don't need to hear this from me, but you're writting is great. You inspired me, now i need to be better then you n_n not that i'm any good right now. I'll read on and i think i'll start workin on my own crap stories.U R Rad
Crazy In 88 2005-09-17 ch 4,	Sorry I just now read this. :). Busy busy busy. It was good. Wonderful, nothing less than I expected. Man... I'm just not understanding why you're not published yet! I just re-read the second chapter of Violent tendencies and slash-dance future. I wasn't able to review them... they were all good. Well, I updated Hellcat just now. I'll be updating more now that I have 3 days off. Work sucks...especially at McDonalds. Much love, ttyl and all that good stuff. -Yin
brevis 2005-09-09 ch 5,	Now that's just about the worst thing in the world, when you said that this chapter didn't come out to your expectations. Because it rocked. Sorry I couldn't read the fourth hour until now, its just that I've had a very severe case of writer's block that has crippled the creative juices for about four months so far. I'm hoping that I can find some inspiration now that school's started again, although I can't be sure...but forget about me, that's not what this review's about. ALL of this in one night? Wow, I'd really hate to be Rachel right about now. (don't get me wrong, though-- there's nothing wrong with the story. Just a matter of personal opinion.) Anyways, I dearly love the fact that there is still more of your wonderful suspense and supernatural elements in this work (as well as some obvious Terryll awesomeness ^^). I am addicted to all things fantasy and supernatural, and this is a welcome break from some of the other stories I read in those particular categories, as well as the ones I write. I don't know why, but there's just something so GREAT about all of your confrontations! I also loved the supernatural element that pervaded the entire discussion. They're so addicting to read, and even more so to write, trust me. ^^ Oh, and don't worry about all the things you think wrong in your story: after all, mind-numbing confusion and semi-directionlessness is how almost all suspenseful stories are. Until next time.
Profiterole 2005-09-07 ch 5,	Yay! An update for "Th13teen Hours"! It was a great piece of writing, as usual, Terryll. Don't belittle your work like that! ;-) So, we're supposed to notice three things? Here we go for my theories and/or remarks about this new chapter: 1) Dr Richards is definitely suspicious! This chapter confirms my first opinion. He knows much more than he wants to tell. In addition, he doesn't let Detective Moore see Rachel, which is really strange... 2) Detective Moore has a dark past. What a coincidence! Moreover, the whole scene when he was thinking about his past was really weird, like a hallucination. Would Doctor Richards happen to have psychic powers? Now, I didn't think there was going to be some supernatural events in that story, but why not? You never know what to expect. Mwahahaha! 3) Dr Hansen is Dr Richards' lover. coughs I mean, 3) Dr Hansen knew Rachel when she was a kid. What a coincidence! Again! We still don't know what happened to her at that time, but that looks pretty awful. She was probably abused by her father, or something of the sort. Conclusion: This story is Lost-esque! Two coincidences and possibly some supernatural, I tell you, this is Lost-esque. Now, you know the problem with Lost-esque stories: yes, you're right, cliffhangers. So you've got to update this story as soon as possible, because there are still 7 hours to go! PS: See, I'm not the only one who doesn't like French movies. KonekOniko said in her review that she didn't like "March of the Penguins". lol
Danny-Boy-Zero 2005-09-07 ch 5,	Mister Preston... Once again I'm sitting before my computer, reading the words you type. Once again I'm well pleased. Critically, there isn't much to say about this chapter that you missed in your own review. The interaction between the men was somewhat stilted- though in your defense, two of the three were upper class, high dollar types... The entire premise of the work, thus far, seems interesting enough to me (though I'll need to go back and read the first chapters first...) though the basic concept of the timeline is very "24". (That's good I think... 24 was genius on TV, so it should serve you in good stead here.) I'm impressed with the way you contrasted and blended the differences and simularities between worshipping at Chruch and worshipping at the alter of flesh! Though, for me atleast, the only real difference has always been that the alter of flesh seemed a more fitting place of worship... I lost contact with you, a while back... it's good to touch bases again, even if it is only via the medium presented herein. Take care, TTP. -Danny Boy
kazoua 2005-09-06 ch 5,	Yeah, I used to be xxphatxbaybeexx. It would be a little silly if I weren't, wouldn't it? Ah, well. Thanks for the litte answering on religion, but this chapter confuzed me even more than the previous ones. I'm one to enjoy the quality of suspense and pychological stories, and not as much understand them. Too bad you won't reveal more than nesesary. I wonder, the way the story is going, I'm not even sure if there is even a guy who is really messing up her head, or if it is seriously some thing her head made up. But, oh well. I guess I just have to wait for your next chapter. I'm getting excited just thinking about all the confusion I'd be faced with when I read it.
KonekOniko 2005-09-06 ch 5,	-whacks you in the head with a paper fan- what do you mean you think this didn't come out the way you wanted it to? this was awesome! man, this story is so...sick, lol. not the bad sick, the "oh my god, this is written to awesomely and it's like watching an awesome psychological thriller" sick. i mean, this should be like a movie, this would be so much better then march of the penguins (two...hours...of...nothing...but...penguins...you think it'd be more entertaining!) okay, i'm going off topic. oh well, i love how there's always a new twist and i hope it's a killer ending (but i'll hate the ending anyways, i never want a good thing to end) when the 13th hour comes. lol, okay, i'm just tired ^-^ can't wait for the next chapter! ~sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.
Ashes.to.Acid 2005-09-06 ch 5,	Oh my God! You are good! This story has so many twists, I love it! squeals As for your little msn thingie, I'm considering joining. ^^ Keep up the great work, I love every single chapter that you write up.
Aikoh 2005-08-19 ch 4,	Wow. I always love reading your works. Your characters are always incredibly deep and three-dimensional. The way you write just flows together; there's just enough description, dialogue, action to fit the story and it's dark mood. And the little twist at the end. I did not see that coming. I also really liked the symbolism of sin and references to any religion relating to the Lord that truly make you think. And this is such a realistic depiction of a person in the situation she's in, the psychological damage done… You are truly a brilliant writer, of caliber I have not seen on FP in quite a while.
AsTheRainFalls 2005-07-25 ch 2,	I love the way you capture the emotions. I'd like to see what happens in the thirteenth hour.

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