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Reviews For: Hidden Destiny

Swift0014
2005-09-14
ch 9,
hey i like the last chapter you posted cant wait to continue the story keep up the good writeing
Clodhopper
2005-07-10
ch 6,
shortness isnt really a bad thing. this was an interesting story, it caught my attention pretty fast, i liked Tyler. Sam seems like a hardcore brat at the start, tho, i will admit. also, u say that she has no enemies but not friends, yet Serena or whatever her name was talked to her and they seemed to get along "giggling." just something i noticed. again, this is a pretty cool idea - unique

~Mack
eikothewerewolf
2005-02-10
ch 3,
cool story, i like it...erm...maybe its just me, but wasnt the girl called samantha at the start though?
K. Jaylan
2005-02-08
ch 2,
That's quite an illusive start to the story; it'll be interesting to see what the deal is between Tyler and Shara. Keep writing.
Aries is the god of wotever
2005-02-04
ch 2,
its a pretty good story, cant find ne mistakes, keep writing its really cool
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