hey i like the last chapter you posted cant wait to continue the story keep up the good writeing

shortness isnt really a bad thing. this was an interesting story, it caught my attention pretty fast, i liked Tyler. Sam seems like a hardcore brat at the start, tho, i will admit. also, u say that she has no enemies but not friends, yet Serena or whatever her name was talked to her and they seemed to get along "giggling." just something i noticed. again, this is a pretty cool idea - unique

~Mack

cool story, i like it...erm...maybe its just me, but wasnt the girl called samantha at the start though?

That's quite an illusive start to the story; it'll be interesting to see what the deal is between Tyler and Shara. Keep writing.

its a pretty good story, cant find ne mistakes, keep writing its really cool