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| Swift0014 2005-09-14 ch 9, | hey i like the last chapter you posted cant wait to continue the story keep up the good writeing |
| Clodhopper 2005-07-10 ch 6, | shortness isnt really a bad thing. this was an interesting story, it caught my attention pretty fast, i liked Tyler. Sam seems like a hardcore brat at the start, tho, i will admit. also, u say that she has no enemies but not friends, yet Serena or whatever her name was talked to her and they seemed to get along "giggling." just something i noticed. again, this is a pretty cool idea - unique ~Mack |
| eikothewerewolf 2005-02-10 ch 3, | cool story, i like it...erm...maybe its just me, but wasnt the girl called samantha at the start though? |
| K. Jaylan 2005-02-08 ch 2, | That's quite an illusive start to the story; it'll be interesting to see what the deal is between Tyler and Shara. Keep writing. |
| Aries is the god of wotever 2005-02-04 ch 2, | its a pretty good story, cant find ne mistakes, keep writing its really cool |