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Reviews For: When He Comes
Aslan Israel 2005-03-04 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Flows nicely. Great job.
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-02-05 . chapter 1
to me this sounds like one of those songs that's telling you not to listen to an evil man or something like that. But overall I really like it. "And when he comes

Listen carefully

Till he runs out of words

Oh, it may seem never ending

But it ends…"

nicely written there. Keep up the good work.
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