 B- 2009-04-12 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed the story (so far) and was sad when it came to an arupt halt!
i would love to find out what happens.
Also your development of characters is really good - and i feel as if i know patience. - but in a way i felt i was let down the character of her roommate.
Overall, like i've said, i really really enjoyed the story.
please update! (even though its been a few years) |
 Instant Ninja 2006-03-23 . chapter 11...Nice Job.
...haha...sorry, couldn't resist. Well, well...who is this MRE man James? ...because we all know that in this story, family name is everything.
...Patience is awesome. I wish my sister was that nice.
...until next time!
-WLFH- |
 Alenor 2005-12-29 . chapter 11heya, great story so far, i kinda pity patience for being out of her depth but i'm guessing things are getting better for her with charli and stuff. btw, i like the sound of james, he sounds like a normal person rather than some stuck up pretty boy. can't wait for more, cya ~ Alenor. |
 Aeryn's Last 2005-12-01 . chapter 11The characters are realistic, the plot slightly slow but there's something devouring about it; you just want to read more and more and more. Good job. |
 Exquisite Enigma 2005-11-04 . chapter 11Add more about James!! I like him. Great story BTW. |
 Unknown Reader Of Many Stories/Poems 2005-09-01 . chapter 11 Great story you have here! Please update soon if you can. My favorite character would have to be Ana. She's just so fun and cool and stuff, but I do like Claire too even if she does study A LOT. lol. |
 TurtleGoddess 2005-07-29 . chapter 11I'm really liking this story! It's well written, and, except for some very small spelling mistakes here and there, your grammar is good,too. And I love the characters! I'd have to say Patience is my favorite at this point, as she is the narrator... although I like Charli too. Anyways, it seems like you haven't updated in a while, so please continue soon! |
 LivingDeadGirl09 Not Signed In 2005-07-25 . chapter 1 This story sounds really cool! Can't wait to read it. If you could, plz review for my story 'Rivals For Life'. It really needs reviews. |
 plastic figurine 2005-07-14 . chapter 11See with me, I always run into the hot guys but I never see them again. Tragic? Yes. Anyways, I think you play Patience's nativity too heavily. I mean on the fact of celebrities, she reads all of those magazines yet doesn't know who "paris" is? It seemed a little unbelievable to me. Otherwise, great chapter, I'm waiting for more.
xo-adc |
 plastic figurine 2005-07-13 . chapter 8I love this! I am getting kind of tired so I will read the rest in the morning.
xo-adc |
 plastic figurine 2005-07-13 . chapter 6Yay, California :) |
 plastic figurine 2005-07-13 . chapter 2I made a note to read this awhile ago when I was busy and now I am getting thr time to! I really like it. Big family, hated name. Very cute. |
 Akia Blakemore 2005-07-10 . chapter 11i think i would die if i went to a school like that. definitely can't live wearing heels all the time. just two hours in high heels kills my feet, and i'd rather have feeling in my toes. but - james is a hottie. ;] and patience has some guts to go there. and go to the party for that matter. i like lilach. hahaha. and charli, and the only reason i would EVER consider going to bree is to take the newspaper classes...i love writing! |
 dani-sgga 2005-06-17 . chapter 11Yay! new chapter~ it took so long! WHY? OH, WHY? i want more james!-dani |
 JojoAnn 2005-06-16 . chapter 11yaay. been forever. helpful review..hmm..i think it'd be funny if they bumped into eachother again they'd literally bump into eachother. yup. okay. haha. bye. |