great story...keep it up...hope to see more soon
i say do really graphic transformation with Amy but have little pain with it as for her meeting Jeff have him go to the same school...but thats up to you keep up the good work

Ok, I guess that was cool. I wait for more.

Ok He seems frustrated. I wonder if he will get the cure.

Great chappie. I would prefer a graphic transformation, please. I cant wait to read the next chapter. SaphirePS- I can't wait to read the Social Lesson scene.

thanks for clearing that up.

Good chapter. Why was Amaris destined to be a werewolf? Well, I'll just wait and see. Please update soon.Saphire

Hey you have some nice charcters here. Nice story too by tha way. Also thanks for the review do you like me story?

Cool! ^_^

Thanks for clarifying the Atlantian Werewolf thing. I hope you come up with some good ideas for the next chapter, and update soon.Saphire

I'd like to know where you're going with this. You really need to develop your characters. Maybe you could start by explaining what Marcos wanted with her and why she was bitten in the first place.

I hope you get some good ideas. Maybe you could have Amaris's parents enter the sceen, and explain a little more about Atlantian Werewolves, focusing on how you become one.Saphire

cool. please update soon.

i like the story alot. please update soon

Ok, the style was dirrent here, but still good. I hope you explain more later. Overall this is good stuff. Also, yes, what I have seen of Inuasha is good, and Yu GI Oh is not bad.

Ok, this is looking pretty good. I like the stuff that is happening here. I will read more.