As you said, it didn't make alot of sense... but the style was good. I loved the minimal dialouge, and the great description. -Moonlight Writer

So Alisha has twins does she? is this pre-shadow winngs? it's a cute little 'happy family' story and you portray children very well. Just one thing you may or may not have noticed, you ended a sentance in the middle: 'Sapphire eyes watched on as two small children played before the. The nursery they played in was full of colour and thought'