Well this is random - stream of consciousness that dissolves my brain into strands of spaghetti.

Aha! So that's why you put down such a stinging quip on that thing I wrote; you hate the idiot-poets of this site, and the ones who use big words! Well, that's totally what I do. It's not like I KNOW an unusually large number of words, or habitually RELY on them to express myself intuitively and spontaneously. I just break out a thesaurus and start converting phrases like "uber prettiness" into "pulchritude." Yes, lots of what I put on this site ventures out of my preferred demesne of straight fiction and into that of abstruse, expressive poetry (also known as butt-**). No, that isn't license for every ** cynic to drop in a pointless flame. I do it all the time, but only to the worst of stuff. If something is horribly spelled, poorly grammaticized, or--I guess--random, then feel obliged to comment. If not, then keep your Carlin-wannabe trap firmly shut.

Yeah dude, not bad, whatever. You're an a-hole! Haha, but your reviews are pretty hilarious ;P I dig the writing style. Totally the opposite of effervescent, haha, whatever word that is. Some of it seems like a bit of stretch, but stretch or not, the language is beautiful constructed. I dig it, even the words I don't know ;P Good title too. Keep the shizz up.

Hello - this is about your review for my short story 'Glittering Rain, Glittering Shards'. Review? Or more of a flame? I accept critism which would help me improve my work - your's does not. Upon looking at your previous reviews, I see that you have got some angry comments from other users of FictionPress. In no way do you have any right to go round and causing upset like this.

First of all, you say that the change in the protagonist is to forced and abrupt? That nobody can be sad and then go onto being 'happy'. The protagonist is never happy, but granted, he is optimistic. You should consider things before you type. Actually, the protagonist has spent ages being sad and mourning and crying. When the story takes place - it is the final transition of him coming to terms with all that has happened. And in actuality, the protagonist feels that in order to survive and live the future he still has, he has leave the darkness of his life buried. Maybe you should have considered that before announcing your word of 'law'?

And the next part of your review was unfounded. 'And just for the future, including "reviews" of your story in your story itself is quite obnoxious. I'll judge this for myself, thank you very much.' DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA how much OBNOXIOUS YOU sound? No - evidentally not. For your information, the review was from someone who could not put a review in the review tables. In no way was it obnoxious - but someone as obnoxious and sanctimonious as you would think that. You say 'Just for the future' as though you are some sort of high-power - which is absolutely disgusting, and then 'thank you very much'. I cannot believe how shallow some people are. You need to sort your attitude out. Oh, and 'just for the future' - no - thank-you very much - do not enter my page again. I am still wondering how you can go around talking to other authors like that - you are obviously so god-like that even you cannot handle it. Do you have any friends? Stay away from MY work in future, thank you very much.

Oh, you think this is hard to understand? I've read worse. It's very...interesting though. I now know to stay far away from Robert Pinsky. And I'm even surer that I don't like satire much.

My uncle used to write poetry in this idiom; only, it was the 'seventies, so he included a few misappropriated lines from Simon and Garfunkel and Nietze. Not laugh-out-loud funny, but smile-inducing. I wish you'd experiment more with other types of humor or something serious; surely your skills aren't limited to pointing and laughing...

Not that impossible.

BTW: "Evolution vs Creation" is not a book.

I love the renga part. It's CLASSIC. Hahahhahaa...I do that occasionally. Make up words. Like posher. Did you know that posher isn't a word? Huh...IT IS A WORD DARREN IT IS!

i got lost through half of it. It was confusing but i liked it all the same. I always try and get the best out of everything-even if it's like a major bad song by NSYNC or something like that. I usually make fun of those though and then i love the song just for that reason. Oh well i'll shut up now. Good poem. Oh and try to make it easier to understand so otha people dont lose it. I still say you have good writing. Now i'll shut up.Geena

hey,thanks for the flame, you could have made it constructive criticism though. No need to be a b*tch about stuff. And besides, you don't know anything about me or my life, so don't be so quick to judge. Next time, think before you type. I know you want to be known as the most popular writer or reviewer, but there are certain ways to go about doing things.

Anyhwo, this poem was pretty fun and you seem like a cool person, but you're too quick to judge. It's cool. A lot of people are. Take it easy and write more. Later.

Hmm. If the point of this was to pile a bunch of incoherant ** into a word document, then I dare say you suceeded. This was the most poorly written piece of ** in existance. God hates you for this. Please for the sake of everyones minds, never write again.

Confuzzling, but good! You are on your way to writing stardom!

this is a long poem, with long words, lol. i thinkit was interesting, and kinda funny in some parts. gr8 one.

HEY YOU FREAK HEAR THIS!

HEY READ WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN AND SEE IF YOU CHANGE YOUR MIND I wrote a little preface AND IF YOU DON'T THEN DON'T BOTHER READING MY STUFF AGAIN!! I DON'T NEED SMART ALECKS LEAVING REMARKS LIKE YOU!Thank you for your uncooperation

I will now be posting a note on my screen so EVERYONE can see that I don't want them reading your work!

i don't get it but somehow i find it oddly entertaining, i'll read your other stuff if I have time, you seem to have promising work ^^

~Annie

PS: if ur wondering why my SN seems familiar you left a R&R for my satire