"facade's" must be French, non? What does it mean? Again, I love your imagery.

*Amber*

mallory, you don't always have to be strong...and don't worry...seany boy is there for you...you don't have to test him you know he loves you...oh btw WONDERFUL POEM...i never seem to give you criticism on your poems do i? well iguess i don't have to b/c there WONDERFUL!

nice really love the flow and i can relate to this soo much...nicely done..i love it. lots of love AllyCred

wow.. very powerful images & beautifully written

Really good. Awesome stuff.

Thanks for the review!