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| thursdays and rain 2008-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseadorable.. |
| randomunknown 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuse"Pushing it into your arms for you to take away" - I just love that line. I love all of it actually, it really shows how you'd give a person the world. |
| AngelaSolis 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. It's mysterious and different. I love the line about 'the sharp stars too'. Thanks for reviewing mine. I'll read more of yours now. |
| smile persephone 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI love the first two lines. It really drew me into the poem! The part about the sharp stars is genius. (Although it seems like a simple concept--it's something that I've never seen before. It's just perfection on it's own.) Lovely poem, just lovely. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abuse"I want to say, that I made this sunset for you." That was pure, unforgettable genius. Another good touch was the fact you put "I" in the have- that was very creative and worked well. Really, keep writing. You're terrific at it. On a level, I thought of Sylvia Plath, and I hope you take that as a compliment! |
| MaHaLLz 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abusethis was really sweet. who turned twenty-one? happy birthday! to whose ever birthday it is... |
| eighteen hundred 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked the first part, the second part didn't seem to flow into the first part though. But an alright piece. |