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| Getuie 2005-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseYou know, sometimes the best way to bring a point accross is to use the simplest words and just say it... I think you've illustrated that so well here. The poem is touching, hard-hitting and challenging all at once. Well done |
| Nymphomaniac Kittie13 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis one was great and anything but weak! |
| BlackFlights 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abusea very good piece that made me think. I know someone who thinks that admitting your feelings is weakness and it very hard to get close. well done |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very touching poem and the last line was awesome. God you're poems kick **! I hope to see more soon. Masochist Maxwell |
| AllyCred 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abusevery very good, i have to say i loved the comments on what weakness is then the last line is pitying those who are strong, extrememly well written..i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThat can't be weakness, to do what's right, but if it is, then I too feel bad for those who are strong. Then again I don't exactly always show my emotion, but I just call it being the living dead: technically you're alive, but don't really respond to live. I LOVE IT! |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseVERY NICE! I loved the last line - Great job. |