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| Crazy Biene 2005-02-13 ch 1,   | nice flow...and rhyming |
| BlackFlights 2005-02-10 ch 1, | the repatatism works well it builds up the piece. I think this is a great poem your imagery is fantastic. |
| Morbid Maxwell 2005-02-08 ch 1, | That was awesome. It flowed nicely...heh heh, look at me talking all weird like. I loved it though, great job! Masochist Maxwell |
| AllyCred 2005-02-08 ch 1, | very nice i really liked this...the flow was perfect and the rhythm was superb...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Forget-The-Sorrow 2005-02-04 ch 1, | That's really good. I LOVE it! |
| pleasecometrue 2005-02-04 ch 1, | Good write ;) |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-02-04 ch 1, | Not bad - it should have been a bit longer. But still I liked it. |