"And it was only her cure"...

I think that you are right.

*Amber*

Charissa i love you! boys are sucky! don't let him bring you down, the bastard...good job mallory wih the poem!

this is beautiful...really captures the feelings and emotions so well...i know how this is and can relate a lot...very well said i love it. lots of love AllyCred

P. for the review appreciate it.

i can completely relate.. very powerful and beautifully written

Your poetry shows much promise, as you seem to be teetering right between good and great.

You do tend to fall into a few cliches.

But I really love the line... "of his shy and easy kiss." That is so evocative. Good work.