wow. i like it :) keep up your work!

Good poem; well written. Keep it up!-Anna.

sometimes things hapen sometimes they end doesn't mean the love wasn't there even in the end.

shite, if this is based on real life, then i'm sorry, but we men are morons. its TRUE *runs away before men start throwing rocks*. seriously, half the time we dont notice things we should, and notice EVERYTHING we shouldnt, but we're not ALL bad.

Peace and Chicken Grease

7.5/ 10 : subject is good, rhymes are good, although slightly childish-seeming at times, though that does nothing to ruin the experience of the poem. flowed well.

this is so sad. you have really written so that everyone can understand.

-write on!

(and thanks for all the reviews. I really appreciate it.)

I don't know. Why?

A question, among others, that many of us have asked ourselves.

good piece, i can so relate, great job, thank you