Hi ... is this the story? I had forgotten about it and then i found an email .. and i came here to check it out. You wrote it. Wow. And in the early 1900's. Well done. You are really talented. Good on you. :)

so far, i like this story and i'm hoping that you might update it soon.

WOW. Loved it. Or so far. You need to write more. Pish Posh with people and putting down of your first chapter for this story, it's a good start off. You could work alot off from this.

Please continue!

Shana

This is a very promising story, which you should continue soon. I love the way you made the whole problem with Amelia's mother dying so realistic, that it was that touching. I can't wait to see what father and daughter will be doing in America, especially when Amelia's love life starts throbbing. Very good job.

Trinity

OMG it's so sad! I think the conversion about Amelias studys and going to America could have been better writen. You might want to rewrite it or something. Do you live in London or America by the way? I'll check back.

All Ways A Critic,

Writer With Style

P.S. Very nice plot line if you can pull it off

very emotional.