Amazing poem. So much emotion. I had the same problem with the brackets on one of my poems. It looked so much nicer with them, too. Anyway, you're poem is beautiful! It's going on my favs.

woohoo!

me like! me like a lot!

very nice job!

i like the imagery and EVERYTHING!

great punctuation considering the crappy edit thingy...

^^AWESOME!--prongsie