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| Maia 2008-06-13 ch 32, anon. | abuseI loved most of this story, except the ending. I did not like the ending one bit. Maddie and Jason have been through so many ups and downs, so many that when the third or fourth down came I shut off the computer and walked alway. Now I did come back and finish the story but the ending was so cruel I almost wish I didn't read this story. There's only so many ups and downs in a relationship I can take, before they become reminiscent of some of my previous friendships with drama filled teens. Overall this was a very well written story with great chemistry, but the ending left me feeling a little bit cheated. Thank you for writing a very lovely story and sharing it with us on fictionpress |
| hmmmm 2008-06-11 ch 32, anon. | abusei like your story :D (but i haven't read it in a while so i can't give helpful feedback) but umm san francisco? no where near LA. there's like a 6 hour drive. san francisco is norcal LA is socal |
| darkgurl92 2008-06-08 ch 32, | abuseomg..i luv this..the ending..omg..why...r u going to make a sequel to this.. |
| Channah 2008-05-12 ch 32, | abuseI wish you'd post the sequel. I really loved this story and I'd love a happy ending on the whole line. :) Plus I think it would be really interesting with a new setting like San Francisco and new circumstances. Oh well, I guess I just have to continue hoping... :P |
| girlnextdoor7 2008-05-12 ch 32, | abuseoh my gosh...when is the next sequel?! |
| sweetbabii45 2008-05-06 ch 32, | abuseOMG this story is like soo awesome!! andandandandand when is the sequel coming? |
| sammygurl262316 2008-04-28 ch 31, | abuseBtw, just so you know, I NEED NEED NEED TO READ YOUR SEQUEL ALREADY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUT IT UP SOON!! I BEG OF YOU! I love Jason by the way, as most people do.. :)) |
| sammygurl262316 2008-04-28 ch 32, | abuseWTH?! He gave Maddie a plane ticket and she didn't see it after 5 years?! I'm gonna kill Maddie! I do love them together though... |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2008-03-29 ch 32, | abuseI've just read your whole story I love it, I hope you do sequel I want to see madde and Jason get together |
| MissBamBam 2008-03-15 ch 32, | abuseI really liked this story. It was very witty, and kept me wanting to know more. The first chapter was a bit slow. I had to push myself to continue reading it. But you picked up right after, so that was good. I really hope you put up Capturing Madison soon. I want to know what happens next. Although I think she was a bit stupid, to not have opened it. I mean I think it was pretty obvious to your readers that Jason got her a ticket. But seriously. How could she not have opened it! ack lol. So goodluck on your future writing. I'll be looking out for the sequel! -B |
| JackieQ 2008-03-10 ch 16, | abusehalfway through reading this story, just had to stop and tell you how much i'm loving it. seriously am in love with jason, and even nathan. madison is one lucky teenager. :) i really hope you post the sequel soon, and i'm not even done reading this one yet. but i'm guessing the ending might be open-ending, or contain unresolved issues, so i'm desperate to see the next installment of this. also i'm dying to see character pictures for this fic but you've taken them down, so i was wondering if you could post them again or send them to me or something, if it's not too much trouble. anyways, LOVE this, i'm going to shut up now and continue on with the reading! |
| Ravestna 2008-01-20 ch 32, | abusethat was so good. plz write a sequal x X xRavestnax X x |
| Jenn 2008-01-10 ch 32, anon. | abusethis is one of my all-time favorite stories and i just finished rereading it and i was wondering if u were going to do the sequel any time soon |
| Rose Rampage 2007-11-16 ch 32, | abuseGreat story! This is one of my favorites ever. I just want to add that LA is not next to San Francisco. I actually live just outside SF and it takes a good 7 hours to drive down south to LA. |
| x3life 2007-11-01 ch 32, | abuseaww this story was so good!! and really sad.. =[ haha. but i loved it!! |