I did not expect that haha. I liked this story, and I can't wait for the sequel :)

p.s. la's not next to san fransisco.

lol.

he stole the actual locker. funny.

haha. jason is funny.

jason curtis is back . lol.

:))

oh. i like the first chapter already.

jason sounds like a hot guy.

"still in love with purple maddie?"

:)

Is there going to be more?

you do know that san francisco is about an eight hour drive from L.A. right? I think you should have had her relocate to San Diego, which is only 2.5 hours away or maybe even just to L.A.

I loved most of this story, except the ending. I did not like the ending one bit. Maddie and Jason have been through so many ups and downs, so many that when the third or fourth down came I shut off the computer and walked alway. Now I did come back and finish the story but the ending was so cruel I almost wish I didn't read this story. There's only so many ups and downs in a relationship I can take, before they become reminiscent of some of my previous friendships with drama filled teens. Overall this was a very well written story with great chemistry, but the ending left me feeling a little bit cheated.

Thank you for writing a very lovely story and sharing it with us on fictionpress

i like your story :D

(but i haven't read it in a while so i can't give helpful feedback)

but umm san francisco? no where near LA.

there's like a 6 hour drive.

san francisco is norcal

LA is socal

omg..i luv this..the ending..omg..why...r u going to make a sequel to this..

I wish you'd post the sequel. I really loved this story and I'd love a happy ending on the whole line. :) Plus I think it would be really interesting with a new setting like San Francisco and new circumstances. Oh well, I guess I just have to continue hoping... :P

oh my gosh...when is the next sequel?

OMG this story is like soo awesome! andandandandand when is the sequel coming?

Btw, just so you know, I NEED NEED NEED TO READ YOUR SEQUEL ALREADY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUT IT UP SOON! I BEG OF YOU!

I love Jason by the way, as most people do.. :))

WTH? He gave Maddie a plane ticket and she didn't see it after 5 years? I'm gonna kill Maddie!

I do love them together though...

I've just read your whole story I love it, I hope you do sequel I want to see madde and Jason get together