Cool chapter. Liked it a LOT! )

Itory a lot, but the ending is a little off ( I think at least.) I like the idea that they might meet again 5 years later but, LA and San Fransisco are way far away. Not only are they 5 hours apart, but LA is also the second biggest city in the USA. You could have them in 2 small suburbs outside of La such as Torrance ( which is where I live and is still no where close to LA) and Hermosa Beach or Redondo Beach or something. Or you could even put them in Arizonas or something! But I think it would be more likely if they were closer together ( the two cities)

Oh my gosh the part with the toilet plunger is the most hilarious thing I have ever read!

Well there's always the toilet plunger.

HAHAHAHAHA!

good story. very dramatic.

I'm enjoying this story so far. I just wanted to point out that some of your french is incorrect:

It says "Alors peut-être tu peut aller à le bereau de le principal."

The correct spelling and grammar is: "Alors peut-etre tu peux alle au bureau." with the proper accents of course, which I can't access on this computer. You wouldn't say au bureau du principal. It's just au bureau.

I love this story. It is unique and it has my favourite subject at hand. When they (or she) hate each other (or him) an dthen they fall in love. You're a very good author! Can't wait for the sequel!

ASD

yay can't wait til the sequel1!

Nice story.

Are you okay? You haven't posted the sequel and now your webpage has been deleted. I know I don't know you, but I'm concerned about you still being living and all. You have too much talent to just disappear...

Are you ever going to write "Capturing Madison"?

Fell in love with this story. I almost cried while reading this last chapter. Can't wait til the sequel-

- Always.

ARGH your sequel HAS TO COME OUT SOON. i BEESECH YOU!

why didn't she open the letter after he'd given it to her!

AH :(

did you like delete your sequel story or something.. or is -capturing madison- something you havnt published yet?

please TEELL MEE YOUR GONNA DO A SEQUEL! omfg omfg omfg this story made me fuking cry! aw ii totaly wanta noe what happends.. i hope your thinking of your reviewers! really i would like pay you for a sequel.. it ends so sadlly T_T i cant stand it! please PLEASE im sure im not the only one thats asked for one.. [[ okaii ii sound desperate.. *glares* look what youve made me become! ahah!]] any ways.. ONE WORD:...

SEQUEL!

gr... dont keep me hanging please a hunderd times please... sequel...sequel...sequel...SEQUEL!