Woah. Just- completely, completely awesome. The feeling that poem gave me is so weird- almost cold and detatched, but also like I want to cry! It also made me feel like I was going crazy right along with him as the poem continues. One thing I especially liked was your description of someone clutching their old stuffed toys to themselves and ... just... so good!

props you now how to use your words to get to people!keep up the good work! don't lose your tuch you rulelol

Well someone's boyfriend isn't too happy...glad he's not mine...

hm...has a haunted rhythm to it. I like. Very nice.