 windowbreak 2005-03-04 . chapter 1*clap clap* thats all i can say...im speechless once more... |
 Lobster Wedding 2005-02-28 . chapter 1Good physical metaphors!! I can clearly see a guy walking down a dark path and all these things try to stop him, yet he keeps walking...luved it |
 Shadow Haven 2005-02-05 . chapter 1nice...see! I told u! guys r more compassionate!! at poetry dat is... I rely lyk d last bit! though..i wish i cud do dat...keep walking and ignoring my past...Keep up the good work my fren!! i ^_^ i *thumbs up* |
 The System Mother 2005-02-05 . chapter 1Oh, good job ^_^ |