M...nice job! I like it! Kinda confusing in the beginning but you made up the confusion in the job )

It's nice. I really like! Simple but... good.

Sorry I didn't get to you before this; my server was screwed and wouldn't let me access these pages. All fixed though! Yay!

Reading this, I heard it in my head as a song...so very nice rhythm. Interesting theme, as well...I like it! PC

hay when it happens that seems like one of the most ironic things on this earth

I don't think this is irony, though i DO think this kinda makes sense, i'm not sure what it's inspired by though, not too shabby. (p.s., sorry for the lack of reviews, though you've reviewed a LOT of mine compared to others, i shall try to catch up soon, but if it wasnt for work, i'd already have done it _)

Peace and Chicken Grease

6.5/10 : no grammer errors or spelling mistakes, but length could have been longer, subject could have been explored deeper perhaps.

well the first part is ironic lol. Its very sweet, the rhyme is very good.

-write on!

wow, i really like this piece, it's kind of giving me hope on something, great job, thanks for sharing