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| LandUnderWave 2007-10-18 ch 1, | Breathtaking. I don't usually read poetry, because it doesn't tend to strike me as wonderfully as this. You're different. Lilz |
| Lady E 2007-04-28 ch 1, | Like a violent hurricane, the accusations suck me in and I am completely blind to anything else until the last. "Oh, you can lacerate, but can you operate?/Can you fix it?" - A pause in the storm of anger, a tiny shift that seems to point towards why. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-01-24 ch 1, | "ON THE LIP OF REALITY'S PORCELAIN CUSP" - beautiful. can't express my awe in words, but... wow. |
| Make me with Beautiful Line... 2005-03-15 ch 1, | good but i think the ending was a little...eh...it could be better. i really like this poem tho. great job. |
| Momentary Sins 2005-02-18 ch 1, | god, your writing is so powerful. definitely going on my fave authors list. i love your vocabulary. |
| addie pray 2005-02-05 ch 1, | Great imagery, well done. |
| Clockwork Angel 2005-02-05 ch 1, | Amazingly done!..I applaud a very wonderful masterpiece! |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-05 ch 1, | People need to stop reviewing my ** poems and start with yours. You are nothing but amazing. Ginsberg? M. I loves you, Camille. And your poems are like, fluffy balls of magic happiness brilliance wrapped in linen. It's so, ah! You're great. Four stars, man. |