Breathtaking. I don't usually read poetry, because it doesn't tend to strike me as wonderfully as this. You're different.

Lilz

Like a violent hurricane, the accusations suck me in and I am completely blind to anything else until the last.

"Oh, you can lacerate, but can you operate?/Can you fix it?" - A pause in the storm of anger, a tiny shift that seems to point towards why.

"ON THE LIP OF REALITY'S PORCELAIN CUSP" - beautiful. can't express my awe in words, but... wow.

good but i think the ending was a little...eh...it could be better. i really like this poem tho. great job.

god, your writing is so powerful. definitely going on my fave authors list. i love your vocabulary.

Great imagery, well done.

Amazingly done!..I applaud a very wonderful masterpiece!

People need to stop reviewing my ** poems and start with yours. You are nothing but amazing. Ginsberg? M. I loves you, Camille. And your poems are like, fluffy balls of magic happiness brilliance wrapped in linen. It's so, ah! You're great. Four stars, man.