|Reviews for Lacking any attempt to conceal|
| Trish J 12/16/08 . chapter 1
Oh... my... gosh...
It's beautiful. :)
| Joewhatever 2/8/05 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so beautifully written. I love it. Made me smile, the last four lines. Great write.
| Aslan Israel 2/6/05 . chapter 1
Wow. Love your descriptions...like with the coke. Makes it seem all the more real. Brilliant. Brava!
| elvenstorm 2/5/05 . chapter 1
Ooh this is very good! Love the way the lines flow and the words you say. Well done this is very good work!
| simpleplan13 2/5/05 . chapter 1
I like it a lot.. nice job
| PirateGrrl 2/5/05 . chapter 1
WOW, I really loved this!