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   Trish J 12/16/08 . chapter 1Oh... my... gosh... It's beautiful. :) |
| Joewhatever 2/8/05 . chapter 1 Wow, this is so beautifully written. I love it. Made me smile, the last four lines. Great write. |
| Aslan Israel 2/6/05 . chapter 1 Wow. Love your descriptions...like with the coke. Makes it seem all the more real. Brilliant. Brava! |
| elvenstorm 2/5/05 . chapter 1 Ooh this is very good! Love the way the lines flow and the words you say. Well done this is very good work! |
| simpleplan13 2/5/05 . chapter 1 I like it a lot.. nice job |
| PirateGrrl 2/5/05 . chapter 1 WOW, I really loved this! |
