|Reviews for Indescribable|
| the.pink.life 6/23/06 . chapter 1
Wow, I love the feel of this poem. I really like the lines from "The bitter sweetness you" to "Making them bleed all the more." That passage is just really visual. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| diesoz 3/26/05 . chapter 1
Your stuff is wonderful! I can relate to this poem so well! It's almost like I could have written this, only it wouldn't be so well written.
| Aslan Israel 2/6/05 . chapter 1
Love the end. Wonderful.
| simpleplan13 2/5/05 . chapter 1
i can totally relate.. beautifully done.. short but great
| MaryCurly 2/5/05 . chapter 1
I like how you jumped from line to line but continued with the same thoughts. Nice work!