Wow, I love the feel of this poem. I really like the lines from "The bitter sweetness you" to "Making them bleed all the more." That passage is just really visual. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

Your stuff is wonderful!! I can relate to this poem so well! It's almost like I could have written this, only it wouldn't be so well written.

Love the end. Wonderful.

i can totally relate.. beautifully done.. short but great

I like how you jumped from line to line but continued with the same thoughts. Nice work!