Wow, I love this. Doesn't sound unfinished at all. Really lovely. I love it. Keep writing!

interesting idea, very clever, i like this a lot, i like the ending, i think this is great the length it is, as you say, it's all you wanted to say so i'm glad you haven't spoilt this but making it too long x weasel within x

you're right. it does seem a little unfinished. but what you have is excellent. this is amazing. you have a brain worth picking (by the way, that's a good thing, not a stalker thing.) keep up the exceptional work-Lyra

Wow this is really awesome. I don't think it's unfinished; it's wonderful. I love it.

It seems that every thing comes with small print... it makes me mad. I love this poem! It is so true! _

Thanks for your review! I love getting email! This is a great story...interesting title. Very powerful...I love it...if I had room on my Fave stories list...it would be on there *hug*

Strict and too the point I loved itvery good I have always loved your work but this is my favoritekeep up the good workand by the way I would have did a signed review but I'm too lazy to sign in so yea keep up the good workAlyssa

Interesting concept. I agree, it needs nothing more to convey the point. Perfect. And so true...

AW...that was so original and amazing! WOW!

Okay, one suggestion: add punctuation. It tells me when to stop. Everything else is really good. I love your images in your poetry. It's interesting.

i can definately relate... nice job

short, and to the point, i really liked this, and can relate, great job, thank you for sharing