The start was some what ordinary because of the first few lines...but then as I read it it was an extra ordinary poem by an extra ordinary writer.

Eh, the flow was a bit choppy, but you still did well. Nice work.

Rather strange. The repitition in the beginning was a bit... I don't know, could've done without it and it seemed to have ended abruptly. I mean, the concept is great and please don't take my (somewhat shitty) opinion too seriously, but it just seems like it needs a little more , by the way, thank you for the reviews.!

thats reall good :) thx for all the reviews :)

Trust me, I can relate very well to this. Lately I wonder: "What's happened to me?" Well done and thanks for your review

:)Good, very good! It's well written and it brings about a good point! Great job!

Mlle. Daae

great work, i so relate to this piece, almost every word, great job, thank you for sharing