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It sounds like it's the journey of a piece of metal. A nice take on the travels of a sword or blade of metal returning back to the earth.

~Lycan

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I really like the repetition and the rhyming of this poem. No spelling errors. It's great and is very deep.

~Lycan

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I like how the poem adequetly describes the personality of a writer and artist. (Probably you) And also what an artist or writer does in a reader or seer's mind or eye.

~Lycan

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I like how some lines rhyme, but not the whole poem rhymes. It gives it variety.

The beach offer sweet nuts

that line kind of confused me tense wise. Would it be offers?

Great poem.

~Lycan

That's so touching. Beautiful poem Crimson. ;)

Wow, you are an excellent poet! I especially liked Metalworks and I Am. The Elements one was sweet too and the last Summer Rain one surprised me; I've never thought to liken a guy to a thunderstorm...cool.

It flows very well. I loved it!

Seriously.
Where do you come up with all these.
They are really um...undescribable

Defintely send that to managery.

Wow.
You should sumbit these to managery.

Love it.
I can definitely relate.

Ah, the gnarled tree.
I like this one.
What's is about?

Hey,what sup? Great poem but I'll shut up because I've already reviewed. - HalesGreat poem. It was moving. - Christine Great poem.- Nikki

(Before I start, this is Rachel, from the pool at camp, week one. ^-^)

I like the personification a lot, and the depth and creativity. It could flow better, perhaps, but overall I really enjoyed it. It's individual and an interesting thought and perspective,and the wording is quite nice. Since it sounds like you're planning on continuing, I can't wait to read if you do!

May warm winds fill your sails! ^-^ Off to read your other stories.

YAY POETRY! Hiya, Ali! This is Julie (Jan's sister). Sorry for never going on the Net... This was a good and complicated poem. (my slow mind is semi-confused) But it was cool! I love freeform! (though my poems have rhymed lately) WHE! -KMK (yep, I'm Jan's sister)