That was a great poem !! I really love it. (Sorry if I make mistakes writing thios review, but I speak french more often than english and I'm not the best one in english class too)

You should be ''bored'' more often if you write such wonderful things when you are.

Hope you continue writing such wonderful things

Marilyne

oo, very cool theme on this, i liked it a lot, you pulled it off so well, great peice, thank you for the review

Seriously, for something you wrote when you were bored, this rather lovely. It would be interesting to see what you write when you really put your mind to it. I'll have to check your profile for other works.

Just a poem you wrote when you were bored? I'd love to see one when you're trying - this is amazing. Except for the useage of the word "o'er", but I have issues with that word so don't pay attention. This is so good!

That was very good! I love the whole mysteryishness of the whole thing, nice job!

~Mlle. Daae

NICE dude. I liked it on many levels. You simile "Full as a laugh" was good. The last stanza was pretty mysterious and so I liked it. Good work. Look me up too!