So sad.

Having me in tears huh? Great job is what I mean :)

this story just made me cry

omg, this had really made me cry. good job!

The strange thing I was just listening to that song when I read this story.

Your story was so sad, but I loved it. I like the idea that people can seem so different on the surface but still be so alike underneath.

Really fantastic.

AH! this was soo good, and deep and- god, you made me CRY!

Fantastic.

Wow that was pretty twisted. It was really sad, but quite possible to be true. After so long of feeling that you weren't good enough for somebody, you probably would be suspicious of them making a move and downplay the entire seriousness of the situation. How sad :(

bad? you think this is bad? your nuts. this is awesome! i like how you put the lyrics in the story, how it flowed all together. its really sad, but very sweet.

Oh my gosh, that was so sad. :( But you are a great writer... I babysit my little sister during the day, and for the last few days, I have just sat her down with a movie while I come to read YOUR stories! Lol! Keep up the good work!

wow o.0 lol coolies thats really really but really good. and no its definetly not 'pretty bad'.great job keep it up.

why?it was nice though.

ARGH!

This story made me cry. Not many stories can do that. Congradulations.

PLEASE keep writing

*cries* it's so sad...great job..

actually very nice...sad bnut nice

i actuyally know an ass like that(referring to guy)

dangerous intent