This is an excellent story!I like your plot, the aliens, the humans-turnded-into-aliens, and is is one thing: "...junk, he thought to himself..." Just thought should be job!

Very interesting 's see where it leads.

good story so far. can't wait to see what happens when he make it to the new place.

It's very good! There were a couple grammatical mistakes, but nothing that took away from the story. Commas where there should have been periods, mostly. And you may want to explain what a xenotelepath is a bit better. But I am quite enthralled with the storyline! Please do keep updating!