|Reviews for More Daggers|
| perpetual Audio 8/19/06 . chapter 1
your very good at showing your emotion through words the repitition of the word "tears" amplifies this. great poem! adding to my favs.
| Bukowski Is 2/9/05 . chapter 1
Look up the poem "Poetry" by Moore. If you find any meaning in it, you might be able to see exactly what I find wrong in your poem.
| eggsbenni221 2/6/05 . chapter 1
I like this. It's very "stream of consciousness" sounding. I think that a lot of people can relate to the feelings you describe here.
| Chalynka 2/6/05 . chapter 1
wow.. I really like this because it almost portrays how I feel right now like a wound will never heal.. I also really like the emotion in this. great job
| Blood Stained Sorceress 2/6/05 . chapter 1
That was really good.