your very good at showing your emotion through words the repitition of the word "tears" amplifies this. great poem! adding to my favs.

Look up the poem "Poetry" by Moore. If you find any meaning in it, you might be able to see exactly what I find wrong in your poem.

I like this. It's very "stream of consciousness" sounding. I think that a lot of people can relate to the feelings you describe here.

wow.. I really like this because it almost portrays how I feel right now like a wound will never heal.. I also really like the emotion in this. great job

That was really good.