First off, I like the originality. I also really like your story, you are a wonderful writer. I love the style you have, it is quite unique. Keep on writing, and I have a good feeling that you'll go farther than any website. ^_^

Keep it up,

Status-Writing (Ashly)

This story did not get near enough recognition as it should, a damned waste because you sure as hell deserve more than 26 reviews!

I really liked you're story. It kept me in suspence and wondering what will happen next. I think it would be kool to read a short story about something that happens to Kesia, Jonathan, Del, and Afton next, after the girls graduate.

amazing, i read the whole thing in one sitting. continue to amaze.

Yay! *clps* Encore! Okay, well, taht was a good chapter. A happy ending to make me smile. Sorry I didn't review sooner, I had a trip nad got back too tired to think. I'm still a litte spacey, so forgive any random remarks. I don't think there were any typos, but i am not one to ask. I thought the little forgiveness speech by Kesia (wasn't really a speech, though. Just a few sentences. What qualifies as a speech?) was really good. I liked it a lot. Your characters were great and grew well. Fairly dynamic. All in all, a great piece of work. Later!Gata de la Noche

definitely a good ending. Kudos! *applause applause*

:) CD

That was AWESOME! I really really really really really liked it! ^__^

Good story, very good. One of the better I've read from this site.

Yet another wonderful chapter! Way To Go! A very few typos and nothing that will end the world. Very good and super interesting. I can't ait for the next chapter, but, then again, I don't want the story to end. Sigh. Oh well. Great job! Later!

GdlN

YAYS!! this is good. and the Evil Whoozit is down for the count!!

:) CD

i like it alot! update asap! please??

Wow, interesting story. I'm glad I decided to read this. I can't wait for the next chapter so I can see what happens to Afton and Kesia.

Very good story. I had actually read your previous version, but there were a few parts that did need to be edited. I have a question though, in Chapter 2, Kesia says she is a Cancer, and a Leo. I'm pretty sure you can only be one(although I don't know that much about the Astral Calender).

YAY! I am much happier now. Though I thought I was going to run away for the first part. I think I would've dropped out of school and run away from home. Anyways, very good chapter. Only typo that i saw was heal(to recuperate) for heel(your foot). I can't wait to read the next chapter with another confrontation with the shadow. And you did the whole 'the power lies inside yourself' thing without sounding cheesy. Way to go!Well, later!

Gata de la Noche

*takes back the glare from the last review* thank you! Well, think of it this way, it was so realistic that you had people falling for it! So the Triskele just was the catalyst, and now she can use her powers w/o it?I'm slightly confuzzed.

:) CD