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| Limited Edition 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI must say that I didn't understand what the conflict was until I'd read half of it o.O Your flow with words is extraordinary, you don't write a story, you weave it. I chose to read this one since there were so few reviews on it XD OOh they have supernatural powers *__* You've quite created a world in this little peace, and the explanations for all the terms haven't fitted in, because it's simply too short for that. |
| Rob-chan 2005-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuse... Yay, femmeslash! And angsty stuff too. :D I take it that Kellyn was about to kill Calliope at the end because of something she saw in the future? (That was bad for her, or something. Like she found out, that say, being with Call would lead to unhappiness/death and such.) But regardless, the ending had me pretty choked up. Especially the last few words. (Which is a hard thing to do, considering my bitter Heart of Steel. XD) I wish I could draw as well as you can write. *sucks* |
| moosewings 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseNice story! A little confusing, i didn't quite understand how Kellyn got the powers to start with, and what exactly those powers were, but nice plot! (no offence meant!) |