Reviews for To Whom It May Concern

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Donna 2007-02-07 ch 1,	Wow! After the first few lines I could not stop till the end. Very well written. I have enjoyed each one I have read from you so far., Keep up the good work.
conformityfever 2006-02-13 ch 1,	Wow. A unique perspective; not many people concentrate on making the "bad guy" a real person, instead of just a monster with no conscience. I liked it a lot. Really liked it, in fact.
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-10-16 ch 1,	You certianly have a way with keeping the eyes on the paper. This was a very unique piece. I held my breath through half of it... okay I lied through most of it. An addiction to killing... not many people write about serial killers and their obsession with death, or other peoples that is. I like how he was in the midst of his own death. Writing a last letter...giving away his other life, the life he held in the darkness before he slipped into it. I think it almost was his own closure...a sort of last way to gain some positive karma before going to face his creator. Just a thought, I tend to overthink things sometimes, but that is my two cents or dollar whatever. Very good piece though. Excellently thought out. Bravo to you smile once more. You keep my attention.
pepperoni pizza 2005-07-01 ch 1,	Loved it.
CeeKay Sheppard 2005-06-22 ch 1,	Whoa. That was. . . different. Very creative, and very insightful. This is going straight onto my favorites list.
Scraper 2005-05-01 ch 1,	Hm... I don't really know what I should say about this. Not a story buta suicide note from a merciless killer. I'd say he is a monster for having that "monstrous addiction" but hey, evrybody is capable of killing people under the right circumstances...
Shyanne Kai 2005-04-16 ch 1,	really good. One typo: "I have forgotten most of their name" 'name' should be 'names.' I liked the last line "tell them that I am not a monster, but a normal man with a monstrous addiction" It really tells the reader how he feels.
Venustas iaceo 2005-03-31 ch 1,	Wow, that is a good story. It was fairly interesting to read. I wouldn't necessarily label it the same as my own story in essence, because my narrator was telling his story with pride, yours was apologizing. This however does not mean I don't find the similarities, and it doesn't mean I don't like it! claps I congratulate you on a good story. (Though I did find a spelling error if you're interested in fixing it...)
jerusalemslot 2005-03-08 ch 1,	That was a great story! It really showed me how similar serial killers are to us.
Inherent 2005-03-06 ch 1,	This was amazing. I love the way it was writen. I like the comparison with the addictions.
Ryla Dante 2005-02-27 ch 1,	Just another example of your great work. I loved how you showed a different side to a killer. Exquisite!!
suicidal-greeting 2005-02-18 ch 1,	Wow! This is fantastic..No..Amazing..No.. Man it's PHENOMENAL!! You really feel his pain and regret. It's hard to step into someone else's shoes that deeply, and I know how that is so.. Anyways. My point is that you did an amazing job on this. It's a fave for sure!
effi 2005-02-13 ch 1,	Fantastic! You can really feel his pain and regret.
Iqisiazsi 2005-02-13 ch 1,	You're right. I do like this. I find the similarities between your character and mine interesting, but the differences moreso. Your character is addicted to killing but later feels guilt over it, while mine feels that everyone he killed deserved to die, except for the one girl he didn't plan to kill which haunts him. Though his being able to write so much after taking a bottle of sleeping pills is unrealistic, I think this is well written. The voice and style are consistent and you were able to develop Steven's character in less than 800 words. Nice job.
Violet (too lazy to sign in... 2005-02-09 ch 1,	I really enjoyed this; it really took a different spin on a familiar situation. The writing was pristine, perhaps a little too much so for someone who had downed a whole bottle of sleeping pills. Regardless, it was an interesting and thoughtful read, and you should be proud of your effort.

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