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Reviews For: The Years of Chaos Book 2: Purple Hopes

Zeno21
2008-10-10
ch 35,
abuseI absolutely love this story I havent read book three yet but getting ready to. Please finish book two. I read it in one sitting. I cant wait to start on three.
Rayfield Noland
2007-03-09
ch 35,
abuseHowdy. I've said it once and i'll say it again, you are a very talented writer. lol, i only read stories that hold my attention after the first three paragraphs, and i've read at least 3 or 4 of yours (still reading, to be technical). it's funny how my favorite story of yours is the one you don't plan on finishing. well anyway, keep writing and i'll keep reading.
Aero Flame
2007-01-18
ch 35,
abuseso and so. anyway i think its kinda deep in one part and flat in another aspect
for what ita worth
2006-06-25
ch 35, anon.
abuseok, well update soon. tha series is pretty interesting
Proudly Modest
2006-03-15
ch 35,
abusehonestly, if you do not post another chappie soon i may have to hunt you down and force you to finish writing at gunpoint.

sorry if i seen a bit violent, but i have three brothers obsessed with i-kill-you-now types of video games, so i'm a bit desensitized.
Sacred Flame Dragon
2006-02-21
ch 35,
abuseYou know, you really dont't give yourself enough credit. You have a wornerful wrighting style, a unique and very expandable storyline, and an Imagination that rivals every story that I have read yet. You really need to get this published, and I would love to see you actually finish book 2. As for your rating from me-It blows the charts. I have no problem with you spamming my email all day every day. ~Canith Firestar
Casey Drake
2005-02-20
ch 35,
abusebesides some problems with homonyms, and some phrases that are spelled differently (the example i'm remembering is "intents and purposes" which you spelled "intensive purposes".. i forget whetherit was in this one or book one), this is a great story. But then again, I'm always saying my stories suck, so... yeah, anyway, great series, waiting for more, and

completely off topic, so new paragraph, did you ever think of bringing the Sidhe into this (the Irish elves/Fair Folk, pronounced "she")? Never mind, I get too technical. Mentioning the Sidhe would bring a lot of trouble, especially explaining where the Unseleighe went.
Casey Drake
2005-02-20
ch 20,
abusethis would be so cool if it was me, and the president was really this cool.
Drac-frst
2005-02-09
ch 35,
abuseOkay, seeing as how I just read something like 300+ chapters (all that you've posted on this story, books 1 and 2) I hope that you mean that the third book starts here or something like that. 'Cuz I hate not having the hole story. I have literally refused to check out a series from a library, unless I was truly desperate, if one book was missing (really missing, not just unwritten) and the fact that you can just continue the story at book 3 without ever resolving the middle... just seems wrong. I mean, you mentioned that you're writting it as a book for real, right? Well I certainly think it's that quality (and anyone who knows me will vouch that I've literally run out of things to read in my county's libraries), but I have to protest just submitting the last book. There are just too many things to explain, too much background, and too many good things (writting and story-wise, not for Darick) in the first and second books to just omit or outline.

Also, I am a huge fan of in-story romances (I'm a guy, but what can I say? it just seems wrong to have a good story with no real romance at all in it) and I have to ask 2 things; Is there going to be any romance at all in upcoming chapters? - and - You seem to have Darick in near-relationships with two people in book 1 and another different person in book 2... Who's it going to be? (and no, I don't really expect you to give me the answer to this yet, but I can hope...)
mell8
2005-02-09
ch 35,
abuseWow. I don't know what you are talking about. This second story is much better than the first one. This is better written and has a more engaging plot. You should really try to finish writing this!
Heatherika
2005-02-09
ch 35,
abusesuper writing! hurry and post the rest!! or at least more. :)
Heatherika
2005-02-09
ch 20,
abusethat is awesome!! he has the president's phone number! that is so cool. and i like the way you did parts in Arts perspective also.
Heatherika
2005-02-09
ch 12,
abuseyay! Art has been brought into the elven society!! great story beginning! awesome as usual.
Azn-ArchAngel
2005-02-07
ch 35,
abuse:) wow that fulled up my inbox and took me like 2 hrs to finnish but im done :) im a faithful reader if u can say that :)
Azn-ArchAngel
2005-02-06
ch 14,
abuse:) i still love ur storys :) dont doubt urself its not healthy...everyone keeps sayin that to me but i dont listen xD anyways i hope u write more
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