wow...so powerful and true. I hope your sister is ok

Very good. I love the way you potrayed the girl.

aww..this is such a delicate topic and i'm impressed on how well you portrayed it...i'm wishing the best for your sister's recovery...keep writing!

i can relate I have a friend who is bulimic & i used to be anorexic.. great job & thanks for your review

Yep, i know the feeling. It didn't start as a weight issue for me, but that came later on, and it's so addictive, eating disorders. Gets so that you think that you can make all your problems fall away with the pounds... Anyway, you're poetry will improve the more you write, so just keep at it.

very well written...i know how this is coz i have bulimia...very well written its extremely honest and very true as to how the disease can occur...nicely done...really liked this. lots of love AllyCred

Aww..Poor Merel :(

I really hope she's ok. I bet it really tore your family apart.

It's really sweet. The repition is good and it really touches you deep down. Good job babe.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting

this is very good...great job!

wow, very well written, you must know your sister well to have been able to portray this so well, great job with it, it sux that people have to feel that way, thank you so much for sharing