You must be a reincarnate of a Haiku master. This is really awesome work, here.

Heh...it's not my first haiku ever. Far from it. I meant it was the first one I showed on fictionpress. But thank you anyway. ^_^()

your first haiku ever? it's awesome. beautifully written, with beautiful vivid imagery. i like the way you conveyed the contrast in the first and last lines. and i love the diction and imagery in the middle line. wonderful piece. do write more haiku. :) keep up the good work. ^_^