I finished reading Chapter 2. The story is still good.

Chapter 1 was good and interesting.

Sounds good... I wanna know how she died!

I like this chap. There is editing to do but a writers work is never done, is it? I enjoyed this... *clikcs on next chap*

This is sad, but real life isn't exactly happy now is it? The beginning to this sounds like it'll turn out to be a really great play, well I'm off to read part 2. Keep writing!

Wow, rockin so far darlin, I hope you update soon...i'm gonna upload my plays soon! Yay! So, I LOVE it, cept one minor detail, he sounded blunt when he announced to Kurt that she was dead, though I suppose its up to the talented actors to make it un blunt. . .hehe johnnys on tv. . .odd. .. WE WANTS OUR LOST, PRECIOUS, WE WANTS TO SEE ANGSTY!CHARLIE!

Wow..I really liked this Kait! It's fantastic..I'm not really understanding the ending..but it's late on a Sunday night..ttyl~Kat