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mia5081
2007-07-11
ch 28,
abuseSo far, I have read two of your stories (My lover, Victor was the other) and both have made me cry =(
I loved them though lol
~mia
osunale
2006-05-19
ch 28, anon.
abuseI love how this story ends: it's sad, but satisfying. And knowing the future stories makes everything that much better. I had the sudden urge to re-read the Brett and Damon stories this week. I found them even more enjoyable the second time through.
Bedlam Chaos
2006-04-21
ch 28,
abuseTears are drying just near my eyes. I spend the last five hours reading Brett and Damon story.

I like Brett. Very much. He reminds me so many of people who are not evil, neither bad but who just let their life split up without any reaction. He reminds me, my sister, my dad, and... A lot of guys.

Damon reminds me just... me. He takes a lot on his shoulders. He takes a lot because he thinks that it's his duty. Not in this words but he just think that those actions are what he has to do. But little bye little, it's killing him in his head. When everything is going too far he just broke.

I did the same a couple of months ago. Of course, I wasn't in the same situation than Damon. I've a family a house and no endless illness but I bear kind of something which look lifelike. After you feel relieved but also guilty.

Maybe it is why I'm just fond of Damon. We haven't the same life but we need both more love and external signs of affection than normal people and so we're more touchy/sensitive when someone whe cares about say/do something that hurts.

I live in Belgium and my mothertongues are french and dutch so I know I'm not very gifted with English language but I just try. I hope I'm understandable. I read and understand English much more than I can speak or write it. If you want (now or in a year) have your fictions translate in french I would be glad to do it. Say yes and I would be thrilled to give french-speaker the opportunity to discover your writings.

Have a nice night/weekend/month ^^

Dam (hu... ^^" it's the abbreviation of my name... A girlish name but that's it)
S. Taylor
2006-02-16
ch 28,
abuseOk I have a question - Which one is first? I've read Will and You and me, and baby makews three! So I know the end but now I want to start from the beginning. You can e-mail me the answer at: volleygurlchick87@yahoo.com thanks - I absolutely love Lee - the younger one w/ Claire and Ella.
Cherise
2006-01-18
ch 28, anon.
abuseNo wonder Brett is so bitter...that was so sad. And the fact that he just couldn't say why...He really did care for Brett though.
diebyownhands
2005-12-16
ch 28, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed this story. It feels quite real and I completely understand Damon.
afk
2005-12-14
ch 28,
abuseman that was really bad, i mean like sad.. god now i get the other story with trent
Yoyo-chan
2005-10-04
ch 28,
abuse;_; That ended sad. You're such a good writer except when you use too many commas and then it ends sad ;_; I hate sad endings. I guess I'll have to go see what happens to Damon *sigh*

Sad ending = not as much to gush about XP I enjoyed it. It was my first time reading Australian slash. I kept having to google the words I didn't know. Poor Brett. Poor Damon. Poor everyone except Brett's stepmother who I didn't like. ^^;
Quietly Losing Control
2005-08-13
ch 21,
abuseHehe...I wonder, is it just the British and Australians that still find toilet humour funny? Americans don't...they can't even say toilet.
Osunale
2005-07-11
ch 28,
abusePoor damon, poor Brett, poor everybody. Well, this is one heck of a story, and I enjoyed every moment I spent reading it.
Osunale
2005-07-11
ch 5,
abuseAh, the seperated chapters are nice, I'm actually able to resist reading on and on when the next words aren't just a scroll down the page. Lots of love to the story!
ddz008
2005-07-04
ch 28,
abuseGreat story!I loved it, the characters, their personalities, the plot, everything.I knew since the first chapter that they weren't going to end together, because I read your story "Brett & Michael" when I finished reading "My lover, Victor" XDBut at the end, I was feeling so bad... because I loved them and really wanted them happy. :(Wonderful story!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Antony At Last
2005-05-17
ch 28,
abuseI must applaude you for this fabulous accomplishment. It is sad that you are letting them go, but I suppose you couldn't deal with their drama for forever. *claps*
Aoi Mitsuko
2005-05-16
ch 28,
abuseWow. It's over. It's done. *sobs* oh Wendy, nobody writes Damon as well as you do. And will we ever really know what the ** Brett was doing in the bathroom? lol...*sigh* T_T No one will ever write Damon as well as you have. but the ending was really really good. really good.

I'm glad Damon relaized what he'd done wrong. You totally brought this story up properly. you had changes, you had fights, you made it realistic. You pulled it all together in the end. it wasn't cliche, and you used the symbolization with weather, like every good author should put in.

I'm proud of you (Though I'm ten years younger) for doing such a good job on this story. Keep writing dear, it's obviously your calling, and don't EVER let somebodys comments bring you down.

Love,Ms.Lucy
tarredglittered
2005-05-16
ch 28, anon.
abuseI can't believe its really over. :(
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