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| Bi-curious George 2008-06-01 ch 1,   | It was poignant and moving. I liked it ^^. It was obvious, a torubling topic, and I think you dealt with it well :D. This is probably the shortest review I'v ever written, BUT AT LEAST I DID REVIEW! (Unlike some little buggers...*stares in a paranoid fashion at no one in particular*). But yeah, 'twas ace :D. |
| NesquikDudette 2007-07-29 ch 1, | Ahh. It's sad. It's kind of nice, though, the way you wrote it. Barely any full sentences, but you got the point across terrifically. I really liked it without knowing why. This is definitely one of my favorites. |
| Sarah D. F. Wall 2007-04-29 ch 1, | Wow, very powerful. I think your reviewers said it all, but it is very intense and very...good. :] Good work with your imagery and words; you really got the mind frame with the words. Again, bravo. |
| Red Rose 2006-12-25 ch 1, | Your description is so very lovely! So few words and so much told with them. good job! |
| randomperson 2006-10-29 ch 1, | Immensely sad and affecting. You got so much description out of so few words. Wonderful. |
| firestar267 2006-10-27 ch 1, | wow. so sad, yet so powerful, very well written. extremely well done. |
| Limited Edition 2006-01-14 ch 1, | This is good. Could be developed into something. |
| Widom 2005-07-01 ch 1, | *cries, hits random objects* God, I want to beat the hell out of his tormentor. But maybe that's just me. |
| Logical and serene megadeat... 2005-06-25 ch 1, | oh my gawd |
| pneumothorax 2005-06-07 ch 1, | 'The room dimly lit with flickering candles, small torches of fading radiate light. ' makes me thinks of almost the victorians. Last sentance is a stunner. |
| addie pray 2005-02-09 ch 1, | Vibrant images, well done. Rape. Just the word makes me shudder. |
| Smug Bitches 2005-02-08 ch 1, | Kinda makes you wanna kick the dead body, doesn't it? |
| Odyssey2469 2005-02-07 ch 1, | You vividly painted a cruel and twisted scene with description beyond compare… Well Written ~ Odyssey2469 |
| tipping ivy 2005-02-07 ch 1, | Such amazing descriptions! The way you manipulate words is so poetic... it's beautiful. I wish I could have 1/10 of your talent. Great job. Sad, but good. Hopefully I'll see a lot more of your stuff in the future. :) |