WOW! You took a very real (although not personal to me) tragedy & made it VERY personal! KUDOS to you slave, the vison I had of a child tracing their own name in the marble touched me deeply. A very powerful piece!

Talk about a story that keeps the audience waiting on their tip toes for the final bang. And boy, did you have a nice final twist to this.

Hauntingly beautiful piece. I enjoyed the imagery here. I keep imagining different scenarios as I read onward... the spirit of one of the children killed did come into my mind, but that was in a list of others like a former student or teacher or someone kicked out.

I enjoyed this though. It was very well written and you took a piece of reality and shaped this. bravo to you slave. Great piece. Thanks for keeping me entertained for a while *smile*

Bravo!

Wow, I don't know if I quite understand this piece (I'm a very shallow reader if you could pardon me), but this is like seeing your own gravestone. Did they have some kind of accident? Because that is the only reason I could think of why a school would build a memorial.

Hey, slave, *thank you* for reviewing my stories first of all. I liked this story. I personally find it very difficult to write about real tragedies, but you've treated this one with sensitivity and care. Well done!

very sad, but good nonetheless. i see why its one of your favoritee stories.

very touching and interestin topic...keep writing.

-sweet dreamz-

Wow, just... wow. That was beautiful.

Columbine, woo. I remember that. Interesting topic for writing a story.

Really, I don't find it sad personally. (Then again, I'm used to being in an environment where shootings don't take me by suprise...)

However, the way it's writing is touching. I applaud a good story! ^_^ *favorites it*

i thought it was really sad:( it was very well written tho. d xx ps thanks 4 reviewin dead memories

Awesome story. The last line was great.

Wow!! That last line blew me away. I loved it.

That was really good. I could tell what it was about but I wasn't sure where you were going with it and then at the end it all fell into place. Excellent work.

Wow...very powerful piece...the image of the memorial with the flowers and names etched in marble is especially beautiful...brilliant work..keep writing! :)

I never thought about people outside of the US reading this story. To explain things a little, it's about a high school were two students massacred more than a dozen of their classmates.

interesting...it was kinda confusing, but I got it. The last line cofused me, but I can be a real hard nut, lol. well written though.