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| katt's got your tongue 2005-03-23 ch 1,   | It's alright. It's very easy to relate with, though--that's a good point. It should flow better, though. |
| Bloody Doll 2005-02-15 ch 1, | I am so impressed. Mostly, I'm joyous! I know it seems weird, but I have a deep hatred for my own mother, much like this poem. I think you captured that hate well. Talk to me about it sometime. Thanks for the reviews. I'll make sure to review you more as well. -Bloody Doll- |
| karmakaze 2005-02-12 ch 1, | I somewhat know that feeling...where parents try to solve your problems in ways that make them worse. Great work. |
| Crimsonoaks 2005-02-08 ch 1, | upfront and angry, nice! i liked the phrasing, it captured ur frustration. nice job. |
| Anninymous 2005-02-08 ch 1, | Sounds like something out of a young adults (*hairball*) novel. I like it. (The hairball is because I hate when people say "young adults" or "young ladies". It makes me sick.) |
| Anna178 2005-02-07 ch 1, | Damn, my mother too is really neglecting. This really relates to me. Want you to know someone cares.This is brilliant, and the emotion is very noticable. ~ANNA |
| poetic abortion 2005-02-07 ch 1, | This was so deep. I hold similar feelings but none as deep as yours. Beautiful ay to convey this. Well done!! !~* Noelle *~! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-02-07 ch 1, | ** wow... thats deep *hugs* |
| AllyCred 2005-02-07 ch 1, | god i can so relate to this but more with my dad read my poem Respect you might like it...anyway great i love it, the hatred is really evident but also the sorrow i think that you feel that ur mother doesn't care...nicely done very well written...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |