Aw, it's sweet...in a sad way. I only found a few minor grammer problems but other then that Great Job! Keep it up!

~Icy~

Wow. You know how to weave such few words into a tapestry. Here I was thinking it was about something, and then it's about something totally different at the end. . .wonderful. Brilliant. Here I am, shoring up your ego again. . . XD.

Loving it.

Kat

*blinks* I guess I don't understand what kind of papers they would have to sign... I don't remember anything specific we had to sign when my grandfather passed... *screws up face thinking hard* lol well, it's still written very well. a lot of emotion and description in a short piece.

wow, that was really good. the whole time i'm thinking--what do the freakin' papers say! very good, some suspense, good detail, and all around, extremely well written

Hm. That's very strange. But, the mystery did pull me all the way through. It ended a bit abruptly, though. Or, maybe I am just yearning for more of your writing.

I liked it! Suspenseful, and it kept me thinking 'What's with the papers?'It was good! ^_^