Aw, it's so sad. But I liked it. It had a good meaning behind it.

I really like this... hits home with me because I lost a friend in August... nice emotions. Thanks for the reviews, too. :)

This poem is ok, a few spelling errors, but it's clear to see that you really tried. In the future, if you want to use other words, (just as a suggestion) you should use a thesaurus. I have one, and it is awesome, and totally does wonders for my reports and english projects! Keep up the good work!