Actually, the title does fit in the sense that you seem to feel like a broken doll that has been toyed with...very deep, I like it.

it's really scary how so much of your poems relate to me...I think broken doll is a cute name, dosen't really fit into the poem in a obvoius(sp?) way, but thats the charm with it. :) I love all the emtions described, falling and crashing. And thanks for the review about me not being a **, it meant alot. I really felt like a ** after posting it, casuse it made jesper sound like a total jerk, wich i felt he was at the time.

YAY! *does forst review dance* Anyways, this is beautiful. I love your expression in this poem. So real, I can see it. Him cold with death, an icy-cold kiss. This poem is amazing.

amazing...just simply amazing. you have some much depth and feeling in this piece...it really invokes empathy. you're right the title doesn't go but...i havent any ideas. maybe...nah i got nothing. but still very great all the smae.