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| Vinny 2005-03-04 ch 2,  | Hey, I really like the way this story is going so far. Good stuff if you're into that morbid fantasy genre. You keep things in the proper perspective and have this nice modern-day language thing going on. You know, not getting too flowery like you're a renaissance writer. Description's not bad; it helps keep imagery in my mind. In other words: Not great at face value, but good once you get into it. There, happy now? |
| C.L. 2005-03-01 ch 2, | well sister I do believe you've outdone yourself. I wish you would pump out the chapters faster. A story so intoxicating could put me in a foul mood if I can't read it all. Maybe I'll teach you a lesson this weekend daggers only...i owuldn't want an unfair advantage |
| glitzydancingshoes 2005-03-01 ch 2,  | Ooh, hiss. Not a nice ending to that chapter. This is a great story. In just two chapters, you've managed to create at least one very convincing character. The hints about their history concerning their mother weere very intriguing. I can't wait to see some more of this! |
| Vinny. 2005-02-19 ch 1, | Wow, that was some of the worst ** I have eve read in my entire life. That made me want to shoot projectile vomit out of every orfice in my body. That was so horribly sucky, that no amount of the word suck could possibly convey how much that sucky suck ** sucked. No, but seriously, I didn't think it was that bad...And by not that bad I, of course, mean, total **. =D Moohahahahahahahahahahaha *Hacking cough* Sorry. Uhm, HAHAHAHA. There. I think this is the part where I stop contriving humor. Yeah, contriving, FROM MY ANUS. |
| DobbyGrl 2005-02-07 ch 1, | I'm confused, what kind of creatures are they. It sounds like an interesting story so far! keep up the good work and update soon! |